Benton City residents have adopted healthier lifestyles. A recent survey of city residents shows that the eating habits of city residents conform more closely to government nutritional recommendations than they did ten years ago. During those ten years, local sales of food products containing kiran, a substance that a scientific study has shown reduces cholesterol, have increased fourfold, while sales of sulia, a food rarely eaten by the healthiest residents, have declined dramatically. Because of these positive changes in the eating habits of Benton City residents, we predict that the obesity rate in the city will soon be well below the national average.
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the prediction and the argument on which it is based are reasonable. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the prediction.
The eating habits of city residents,’ the anonymous speaker asserts, ‘conform more closely to government nutritional recommendations than they did ten years ago.’The speaker is correct that sales of sulia, a legume that is seldom consumed by the healthiest residents of Benton City, have declined dramatically. However, sales of kiran, a richly pigmented spice that is loaded with antioxidants, have increased fourfold. Although sulia is eaten widely throughout Southeast Asia, it is a legume rather than a grain, and is not normally associated with the diet of most Americans. Therefore, it is not unreasonable to assume that it has fallen out of favor with health-conscious Americans in favor of foods that more closely resemble the traditional American diet. The speaker also is correct that the obesity rate in Benton City is lower than the national average. However, this is likely due to the increased popularity of kiran, not to the decreased consumption of sulia. The powerful antioxidant properties of kiran, combined with the increased availability of improved cooking techniques that allow foods to be cooked in smaller amounts, have led to a dramatic increase in the popularity of dishes that incorporate kiran. Despite their relatively low cost, these dishes have become staples of health-conscious American menus. The increased popularity of kiran indicates that sulia’s decline in popularity is premature, and that sales of sulia may continue to increase.
The speaker cites a survey of local eating habits as evidence that Benton City residents have changed their diets to become more healthy. However, the survey did not identify the types of food that Benton City residents ate. Therefore, it is not known whether the increased consumption of kiran represents a shift from fatty or greasy foods toward healthier choices or from sulia toward foods rich in carbohydrates. Furthermore, the survey did not measure the number of calories that the residents of Benton City consume, a factor that is important in determining whether the residents’ eating habits are healthier. Without this information, it is difficult to determine whether the residents of Benton City are maintaining their body weight, which is a major contributing factor to heart disease, or if they are gaining weight. For example, if Benton City residents have begun eating larger portion sizes to bulk up their meals, their increased calorie intake may be contributing to their increased body mass indexes, leading them to gain weight. If this is the case, then a decrease in the sales of sulia would not bring about a decrease in the obesity rate. The speaker’s assertion that the obesity rate in Benton City will soon be below the national average assumes that the residents’ change in eating habits will produce the desired results in terms of decreased rates of heart disease. However, this assumes two things: (1) that the residents’ eating habits are the cause of the decreased rates of heart disease, and (2) that the residents’ increased consumption of kiran will prevent them from gaining weight. Without more factual information, it is difficult to decide between these two possibilities.
Is it reasonable for the speaker to predict that the people of Benton City will soon have a significantly lower obesity rate than does the United States as a whole? This question must be answered before the speaker’s claim can be considered valid. If the residents’ increased consumption of kiran is responsible for their decreased rates of heart disease, then the speaker’s prediction would be reasonable. In this case, the percentage of residents who are obese would be proportional to their increased consumption of kiran, and consequently, the percentage of obese individuals would be lower than that of the nation as a whole. However, if the residents’ increased consumption of kiran is not the cause of the decreased rates of heart disease, then the prediction made by the speaker would be false. In this case, the decreased rates of heart disease could be the result of other factors, such as increased access to parks and recreational facilities, increased exercise opportunities, or the availability of healthier food options. Additionally, if the residents’ increased consumption of kiran is not the cause of the decreased rates of heart disease, then a decrease in the sales of sulia would not affect the obesity rate. Therefore, the prediction made by the speaker is incorrect.