The following appeared in a magazine article about planning for retirement.

“Clearview should be a top choice for anyone seeking a place to retire, because it has spectacular natural beauty and a consistent climate. Another advantage is that housing costs in Clearview have fallen significantly during the past year, and taxes remain lower than those in neighboring towns. Moreover, Clearview’s mayor promises many new programs to improve schools, streets, and public services. And best of all, retirees in Clearview can also expect excellent health care as they grow older, since the number of physicians in the area is far greater than the national average.”

Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.

Clearview, California, is a picturesque, rural town nestled in the Sierra Nevada Mountains. It is famous for its apple orchards, which were once the largest in the world. The town is also home to a sizeable population of retirees. Many retirees choose to retire to Clearview because it offers them a laid-back lifestyle, with plentiful recreational opportunities. While the town’s natural beauty and mild climate certainly attract many retirees, there are inherent problems with choosing Clearview as a place to spend your golden years. Firstly, while it is true that the housing costs in Clearview have dropped significantly over the past year, the fact remains that housing prices in Clearview are still well above the national average. Although property taxes are fairly low, there are many federal, state, and local taxes that residents must still pay. In addition, although the number doctors in Clearview is much higher than the national average, it does not necessarily provide residents with adequate access to health care. A town can only support as many doctors as its residents are willing to travel to, and many people in Clearview have to drive over an hour to receive medical care. As a result, many residents are uninsured or underinsured, and this can lead to serious health problems if they become injured or ill. Moreover, since the population of retirees is relatively small, the town’s medical facilities are not equipped to handle large numbers of patients at a time. Therefore, retirees in Clearview should take several factors into consideration before they decide to move in. First of all, they should ensure that the town’s medical facilities are adequate to meet the medical needs of their growing elderly population. Secondly, they should determine the cost of medical services in the town. Lastly, they should carefully examine the town’s demographics and evaluate whether the number of retirees is growing or declining. If the number of retirees in Clearview is projected to grow in the future, the town’s medical facilities may be unable to keep up with the increased demand. If so, retirees should consider relocating to an area where resources are more plentiful and medical care is readily available.

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