Workers in the small town of Leeville take fewer sick days than workers in the large city of Masonton, 50 miles away. Moreover, relative to population size, the diagnosis of stress-related illness is proportionally much lower in Leeville than in Masonton. According to the Leeville Chamber of Commerce, these facts can be attributed to the health benefits of the relatively relaxed pace of life in Leeville.

Write a response in which you discuss one or more alternative explanations that could rival the proposed explanation and explain how your explanation(s) can plausibly account for the facts presented in the argument.

The writer claims that Leeville’s lower incidence of stress-related illness is due to its ‘dull, relaxed pace’, and cites statistics to support this claim. While statistics may back up this claim, there are two potential explanations that could account for less stress-related illness in Leeville.

First, Leeville’s relaxed pace may indeed be relaxing, but whether this pace is conducive to good health is less clear. On the one hand, Leeville may be less stressful because its inhabitants are less materialistic and preoccupied with career and financial success. Leeville residents may spend less time worrying about their jobs, their financial future, their social status, and the wealth of others, and therefore may find it easier to deal with these worries when they arise. On the other hand, Leeville residents may be more likely to neglect their health because they do not feel as competitive as their counterparts in Masonton. Perhaps they spend more time socializing or engaging in leisure activities, and are therefore less concerned about aging or illness. Furthermore, people who live a less stressful lifestyle may eat and exercise less. Perhaps Leeville residents engage in more outdoor activities, which expose them to the sun, and thus are less susceptible to the harmful effects of UV rays. Because Leeville residents are less likely to engage in strenuous physical activity, they are less likely to experience the types of physical ailments that stress-related illnesses cause, such as high blood pressure, heart attack, and stroke.

Another possible explanation for the lower incidence of stress-related illness in Leeville is the slower pace of life. In today’s highly competitive world, people strive for success and recognition. Stress-related illnesses can result from difficult working conditions, long hours, or the constant pressure to perform. While Leeville may not be a fast-paced city, this is not necessarily a bad thing. Slowing down and enjoying life to the fullest may be a good thing for Leeville residents. After all, life is short, and people should have time for hobbies, family, friends, and each other. In fact, it may be better to spend less time working and more time on leisure activities. This may explain why Leeville residents report less stress-related illness, as well as why Leeville citizens do not seek benefits from stress-reducing activities.

Perhaps Leeville’s relaxed and slower pace of life is a contributing factor to its low incidence of stress-related illness, but it is not the only reason. Due to the limited number of medical facilities available in Leeville, people with more serious illnesses must travel to Masonton for treatment. Since Leeville’s medical facilities are not as good as those of Masonton, Leeville residents who develop illnesses more serious than stress-related illnesses may decide not to seek treatment.

This article presents an interesting hypothesis regarding Leeville’s lower incidence of stress-related illness. However, the author’s argument relies on two assumptions, both unsupported by the evidence. First, the writer claims that Leeville’s relaxed pace is relaxing. He provides no evidence to support this claim, and even if this is the case, the pace of life is only one factor in determining the causes of stress-related illness. Second, the author claims that Leeville residents experience less stress-related illness than Masonton residents. However, the author provides no evidence for this claim, and even if this is true, there are many possible explanations for the lower incidence of stress-related illness in Leeville. These explanations include the more relaxed atmosphere, the slower pace of life, or the fact that Leeville residents do not seek stress-reducing activities. In conclusion, although Leeville may have a more laid-back lifestyle, this does not necessarily mean that its residents are healthier than their counterparts in Masonton, or that Leeville’s relaxed pace is conducive to good health.

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